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The first thought that came to mind was Blaine and Kurt from Fox's show Glee. They are so similar to those characters, it's scary. Well, how they were in the beginning. I like the chemistry that's displayed between Will and Peter right from the beginning, no hesitation. Your writing style is really natural, and has good flow. There are no awkward phrases or parts in the story. Your use of description was tasteful, there wasn't too much and there wasn't too little. You knew when to stop. You were really good at showing the lust between the characters. The reader could feel how much the characters wanted the love making to happen. Over all, it was beautifully written, with an interesting story line and characters. I definitely want to read more of your work!
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